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Haiku? Haiku!!

Haiku? Haiku!!

Postby Lunarious1987 on Mon Sep 05, 2016 2:22 am

First he said "heads up!".
Then I woke up.
And things went down slowly.
But surely up, again?

Peace

Haiku is a poem that occurs at the moment of its experience. No?
- Don't be thankful to be righteous. Be righteous to be thankful.
- Shia: "We are the friends/owners of proof, wherever it bends we bend."
- Imam Hussein was once asked: what is affluence? He said : Decreasing your wishes , and being satisfied with what is enough for you.”
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Re: Haiku? Haiku!!

Postby Lunarious1987 on Mon Sep 05, 2016 4:59 am

Poem:

Tears are ... Too easy for me.
I don't cry easy tears.
I only cry hard tears, i can't help it.
If i only was destinied to cry easy tears.
It seems like forever (chilchee).
It seems I will cry only hard tears forever, but Allah has the last word.
And it will be easy by Allah's will.

Peace :) (wet left eye)
- Don't be thankful to be righteous. Be righteous to be thankful.
- Shia: "We are the friends/owners of proof, wherever it bends we bend."
- Imam Hussein was once asked: what is affluence? He said : Decreasing your wishes , and being satisfied with what is enough for you.”
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Re: Haiku? Haiku!!

Postby Sparkle on Wed Sep 07, 2016 10:41 am

Droplets rolling down
There is no Lunarious
Who crys these hard tears?

:rbow:
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Re: Haiku? Haiku!!

Postby desert_woodworker on Wed Sep 07, 2016 12:29 pm

Aye!, vicissitudes
"Lunarious" are var'ious,
and no one owns them.

--Joe
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Re: Haiku? Haiku!!

Postby desert_woodworker on Wed Sep 07, 2016 12:38 pm

Same as for "Joe", y'know:
Nature living out its life,
A ghost-less machine.

--Joe
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Re: Haiku? Haiku!!

Postby fukasetsu on Wed Sep 07, 2016 6:53 pm

How can I write a 5-7-5 thingy
If I don't speak Japanese.

Or is there a free form?

oh wait Joe just did it in English
Mijn Oude Vriend uit de woestijn begrijpt geen Nederlands. <3
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Re: Haiku? Haiku!!

Postby desert_woodworker on Wed Sep 07, 2016 7:14 pm

Marcin, :lol2:

Well, but I used a shoe-horn, and some goose-grease:

i.e.,
    I used a shoe horn
    and some slippery goose-grease,
    for the seventeen.

    --Joe
fukasetsu wrote:How can I write a 5-7-5 thingy
If I don't speak Japanese.

Or is there a free form?

oh wait Joe just did it in English
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Re: Haiku? Haiku!!

Postby Lunarious1987 on Sat Sep 10, 2016 4:24 am

Sparkle wrote:Droplets rolling down
There is no Lunarious
Who crys these hard tears?

:rbow:

The whitehaired young.
Were not millions strong.
Despite the Karmic wind.
Like å Buddha.
- Don't be thankful to be righteous. Be righteous to be thankful.
- Shia: "We are the friends/owners of proof, wherever it bends we bend."
- Imam Hussein was once asked: what is affluence? He said : Decreasing your wishes , and being satisfied with what is enough for you.”
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Re: Haiku? Haiku!!

Postby Lunarious1987 on Sat Sep 10, 2016 4:32 am

Allmighty heaven cries.
Who can help?
Buddha.
Like å mouintain.
Arising from the core.
And returning again.
Leaving only lotusflowers.
- Don't be thankful to be righteous. Be righteous to be thankful.
- Shia: "We are the friends/owners of proof, wherever it bends we bend."
- Imam Hussein was once asked: what is affluence? He said : Decreasing your wishes , and being satisfied with what is enough for you.”
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Re: Haiku? Haiku!!

Postby Sparkle on Sat Sep 10, 2016 4:13 pm

Lay Pearls Before Swine
They Bask in Each Others Shite
SEE NOW...Vision None.

:lol2: :lol2: :lol2: :)X :rbow:
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Re: Haiku? Haiku!!

Postby fukasetsu on Sat Sep 17, 2016 3:40 am

lots of Buddhist talk
in parentificiation
we disguise and unite

woohoo I got the 5-7-5 thingy in English :PP:
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